Wednesday, June 25, 2008

I have a lot of things to do!

Help!! I have to do a lot of things! I love my club's member. So, I wanna go to my club meeting. But, I have to do a lot of things. So, I don't go meeting... I am sad.

Portfolio

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Student ID: 07125
(last five digits of
your student no.)






Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1c

(See: Note 1, below)






0.0. Overview






Reviews, Posts, Words, and More





(See: Note 2, below.)






1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

























































































































































































































































































































1.1. Showcase



Short
titles



[+ links]
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)
About me!!
2008.04.09
5
348
1
0
0
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)
MR 1-01:SHREK!
2008.05.07
3

456
0
0
0
0
University life
08.05.18
(350 words)
My university life is Great!
2008.05.18
5
429
7
0
0
0
Another review
08.06.01
(400 words)
Esaay 1-04: My favorite Amusement park
2008.06.02
5
445
4
1
3
0
Language learning
history
08.06.15
(450 words)
essay 1-05: Personal language learning history
2008.06.15
6
560
0
0
0
0
6th essay
Slide show

Introducing Myself
2008.06.06
























Totals---
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Key:





¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length





W: number of words





C: number of comments





L: number of links





P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded





1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.







  • Essay 1-04: My favorite Amusement park
    Because, I use some pictures, and I examined about this amusement park's a lot of information. So, people can know this amusement park's information.





2.0. Comments






































































































































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [post] title

2008.06.04

31

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*




2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

My university life is Great!

2008.05.18

165

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.05.21
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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160

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*


2008.0


2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.






2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?








  • sidebar...





2.6. Additional reflections on comments







It is good for me to be given different comments. Because I can know people's opinion. And I can broaden my outlook. I am happy when some comments are in my post.








3.0. Book Reviews







































































































































































































































































































































































































































3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01
Wrong Man

08.04.23

225

0
1-02
Bad Love

08.04.24

313
0
1-03
Vampire Killer

08.05.25
186

0
1-04
Give us the Money
08.06.11

289

0
1-05
The Little Mermaid

08.07.01

236
0
1-06
The story of Heidi
08.07.01
200

0
1-07
Hamster Chase
08.07.06
160
0
1-08
Henny-Penny
08.07.06
123
0
1-09
Magical Book
08.07.06
166
0
1-10

Gulliver's Travels

08.07.09

148

0
1-11

The last of the Mohicans

08.07.11

225

0
1-12












































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TOTALS:




Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).






3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.








  • [My best book review is "Bad Love". Because of this story is very fun. And I wrote a lot of words. And this story is suspence. So, it is easy to read. I like this book. I recommend this book.






4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media










































































































































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)








  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")








  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)








  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)








  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?







  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?






    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.






    • www (n)



    • xxx (m)



    • yyy (o)



    • zzz (p)



    • ...
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?







  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?








  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?






    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?







  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*






    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?







  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?






    • 4 posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:






    1. ...



    2. ...



    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.








  1. ...Picture : I used a lot of pictures.I want to be know my experience with pictures



  2. ...layout:



  3. ...sidebar: I used a lot of label. And I used clock.






5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing









  • ...It is important for me to write blog. I can't write everyday. But, I enjoyed writing my blog. And I posted a lot of pictures and some medias.






6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors









  • ...

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Notes:








  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).



  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.



  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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Massy's room: My dream

Massy's room: My dream

This is the blog I chose.
She had a funny dream. She became an old woman and she was a wich. So, she was flying in the night with her friends. and Mr. Patrik was also flying with big smile.

Reason why I choose this blog, her blog is fun. And when I look this title, I think she have a dream in her future. But, it is different.

I think her dream is very fun. this dream is very strange, but it is very interesting. And I laugh at Mr. Patric was also frying!! I think Mr. Patrik is real wizard maybe.

Sunday, June 22, 2008

Okonomiyaki

We ate okonomiyaki with my club's member, I love my club's member. We ordered different three okonomiyaki. These were very delicious. So, I had a good time!!

Baketu parfait

This is "Baketu parfait". It was very delicious. But it was difficult for us to eat all.But, We wanted to eat all. So, we ate this parfait cooperation.

And... We finished eating like this!! ↓

←This member finished eating parfait.

Club's event!!

On Friday, our club's event is held. This event called "Radio drama announcement". Radio drama means drama only voice. Our group made a drama of "one piece". "One piece" is one of the comic. And our group was a championship! I was verry happy!