Wednesday, June 25, 2008
I have a lot of things to do!
Help!! I have to do a lot of things! I love my club's member. So, I wanna go to my club meeting. But, I have to do a lot of things. So, I don't go meeting... I am sad.
Portfolio
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Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
Key:
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
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Notes:
Student ID: 07125
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | About me!! | 2008.04.09 | 5 | 348 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | MR 1-01:SHREK! | 2008.05.07 | 3 | 456 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
University life 08.05.18 (350 words) | My university life is Great! | 2008.05.18 | 5 | 429 | 7 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Another review 08.06.01 (400 words) | Esaay 1-04: My favorite Amusement park | 2008.06.02 | 5 | 445 | 4 | 1 | 3 | 0 |
Language learning history 08.06.15 (450 words) | essay 1-05: Personal language learning history | 2008.06.15 | 6 | 560 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6th essay Slide show | Introducing Myself | 2008.06.06 | ||||||
Totals | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- Essay 1-04: My favorite Amusement park
Because, I use some pictures, and I examined about this amusement park's a lot of information. So, people can know this amusement park's information.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [post] title | 2008.06.04 | 31 | |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | My university life is Great! | 2008.05.18 | 165 | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.05.21 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 160 | |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | 2008.0 | |||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- sidebar...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
It is good for me to be given different comments. Because I can know people's opinion. And I can broaden my outlook. I am happy when some comments are in my post.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
1-01 | Wrong Man | 08.04.23 | 225 | 0 |
1-02 | Bad Love | 08.04.24 | 313 | 0 |
1-03 | Vampire Killer | 08.05.25 | 186 | 0 |
1-04 | Give us the Money | 08.06.11 | 289 | 0 |
1-05 | The Little Mermaid | 08.07.01 | 236 | 0 |
1-06 | The story of Heidi | 08.07.01 | 200 | 0 |
1-07 | Hamster Chase | 08.07.06 | 160 | 0 |
1-08 | Henny-Penny | 08.07.06 | 123 | 0 |
1-09 | Magical Book | 08.07.06 | 166 | 0 |
1-10 | Gulliver's Travels | 08.07.09 | 148 | 0 |
1-11 | The last of the Mohicans | 08.07.11 | 225 | 0 |
1-12 | ||||
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Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [My best book review is "Bad Love". Because of this story is very fun. And I wrote a lot of words. And this story is suspence. So, it is easy to read. I like this book. I recommend this book.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...Picture : I used a lot of pictures.I want to be know my experience with pictures
- ...layout:
- ...sidebar: I used a lot of label. And I used clock.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...It is important for me to write blog. I can't write everyday. But, I enjoyed writing my blog. And I posted a lot of pictures and some medias.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
Massy's room: My dream
Massy's room: My dream
This is the blog I chose.
She had a funny dream. She became an old woman and she was a wich. So, she was flying in the night with her friends. and Mr. Patrik was also flying with big smile.
Reason why I choose this blog, her blog is fun. And when I look this title, I think she have a dream in her future. But, it is different.
I think her dream is very fun. this dream is very strange, but it is very interesting. And I laugh at Mr. Patric was also frying!! I think Mr. Patrik is real wizard maybe.
This is the blog I chose.
She had a funny dream. She became an old woman and she was a wich. So, she was flying in the night with her friends. and Mr. Patrik was also flying with big smile.
Reason why I choose this blog, her blog is fun. And when I look this title, I think she have a dream in her future. But, it is different.
I think her dream is very fun. this dream is very strange, but it is very interesting. And I laugh at Mr. Patric was also frying!! I think Mr. Patrik is real wizard maybe.
Sunday, June 22, 2008
Okonomiyaki
We ate okonomiyaki with my club's member, I love my club's member. We ordered different three okonomiyaki. These were very delicious. So, I had a good time!!
Baketu parfait
Club's event!!
On Friday, our club's event is held. This event called "Radio drama announcement". Radio drama means drama only voice. Our group made a drama of "one piece". "One piece" is one of the comic. And our group was a championship! I was verry happy!
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